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Post by Razot on Thu Jul 27, 2017 8:30 pm

I woke up brushed my teeth went to the city bought me a kebab walked at home and ate him.
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Post by Kyle Katarn on Thu Jul 27, 2017 8:38 pm

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Post by A Dog on Thu Jul 27, 2017 8:41 pm

Would sound better if you replaced 'me' with meself, and kebab with sosig.
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Post by Kalthani on Thu Jul 27, 2017 10:14 pm

Razot wrote:I woke up brushed my teeth went to the city bought me a kebab walked at home and ate him.

maybe I am a tard (I sure am) but isnt kebab 'it' not 'he' ?
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Post by Razot on Fri Jul 28, 2017 1:22 am

Kalthani wrote:
Razot wrote:I woke up brushed my teeth went to the city bought me a kebab walked at home and ate him.

maybe I am a tard (I sure am) but isnt kebab 'it' not 'he' ?

dude dont hurt the feeling from the lord Kebab
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Post by Kenshiro on Fri Jul 28, 2017 7:40 pm

you ate pete?!?!?!?
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